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Miscellaneous Have a poetic style of your own? Have poems that defies all conventional categories? Share them here please. (i.e. dark & bitter, political, revolutionary, abstract, etcetera...)

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Thank you, Jeff! It seems I write the best poetry when I'm sad or depressed. I was quietly sitting in my home with the background noises and feeling lonely. It struck me just how loud silence can be in our society.

I wanted the reader to hear and see my surroundings so they could hopefully understand my tears. I'm glad you like my little poem.

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Thank you, Jeff! It seems I write the best poetry when I'm sad or depressed. I was quietly sitting in my home with the background noises and feeling lonely. It struck me just how loud silence can be in our society.

I wanted the reader to hear and see my surroundings so they could hopefully understand my tears. I'm glad you like my little poem.

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Gail this was great you got a perfect ending to an abstract



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Old 07-24-2008, 03:20 PM
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Thanks Erik! I'll take that as a compliment since you write great poetry. I hadn't thought of it as an abstract, lol. I made the images just as stark as the loneliness I felt.

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Awwwww Gail.... You should never feel this way hon. This is a beautiful poem....truly sad though... I know the silence .... ooh how I know. I try to fill it with music.



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Thanks, Mysty! I do have recurring depression and sometimes have to deal with the 'down' periods in my life. I'm grateful it doesn't happen as much as it once did.

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