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Miscellaneous Have a poetic style of your own? Have poems that defies all conventional categories? Share them here please. (i.e. dark & bitter, political, revolutionary, abstract, etcetera...)

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Old 07-27-2007, 06:54 AM
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~SMOOTH INK~

You got me drowning
in your ink,
eating your
screen dust.
your images curl
around the nuances of
my nerves like the
S around UCK of
my efforts on Haldol.

Your style slams
my confidence like a
door in the face,
every beat on
the blue pond of the
mind animates a
verb or a noun of the
wow kind till you’re
at the end of any
thought of excellence.

Your words are hot
like the sun in rare form
burning little
suns in the screen.
With smoking pen you
burn the pages blowing
rhythm from the
white hot tip of rhyme.

Your ink’s as smooth
as ocean on the surface
of a calm yet waves
of cool emotion
rage a storm
of provoked envy.

Your syllables could
silence a storm, sight
the blind till
they saw a
shape of original
in your beautiful mind.

© May 8, 2007 Karen Davies



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