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Miscellaneous Have a poetic style of your own? Have poems that defies all conventional categories? Share them here please. (i.e. dark & bitter, political, revolutionary, abstract, etcetera...)
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Old 05-21-2008, 12:33 AM
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splintering my heart
I pray for sleep to shield me
no news with sunlight

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short, but still nice, I read "the oak" also, but something about this one stood out to me, I don't know, its just like I feel that in those few words there is such raw emotion, but idk, anywho nice piece

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Wow, this poem is rather short but it does remind me of one of my earlier works I did that was four lines long. I really like how raw this poem is stripped down to so few words it speaks a lot without too many words or lines. I must admit I was rather curious about this poem because of the title of it. I think this poem is beautiful with the simplicity of it and I enjoyed it overall. Thank you for sharing, keep on writing!



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