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Miscellaneous Have a poetic style of your own? Have poems that defies all conventional categories? Share them here please. (i.e. dark & bitter, political, revolutionary, abstract, etcetera...)

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Old 07-05-2008, 01:16 AM
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Haha I found a couple and some are now posted =]



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Old 07-15-2008, 05:30 PM
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CW this is a very powerful penning, with a sensual darkness showing the line between love and pain (hurt)
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Haha.. Well the dark side does have cookies so it is very tempting. I love the last stanza as well.
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At first it started out as the beauty of the venom of a snake, then with the last part it turned more into a succubus poised as a snake.
It was just something different to relieve some stress
Hmmm - why is it that I never seem to find the damn cookies
Definitely an interesting write. I'm not sure if I've ever thought of venom as any type of beauty. That's a bit of an abstract thought, unless it's to put an enemy out of his/her misery LOL - Intriguing thought there... Anyway - I actually posted a "snake" poem the other day - It's in the Spiritual section I believe... Would love to know what you think of it

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Thank you Bear for checking the write out, and I agree with you :]
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Well, it might be possible that the cookies have been eaten by the faster members of the dark side? :]
Haha, yes it is a bit abstract. Just the powerful effect it can have on a person with such a little amount of it.
And I will go check that out now and leave some feedback :]



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hmmm - and here I am thinking I'm the fastest

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