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Old 01-21-2008, 01:01 PM
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I gaze upon your twinkling stardust
Drinking your dusty beams at night
I turn to my pillow wishing upon
This dynamic universe: My life

My life I see each wondrous night.
When dreaming of my handsome knight.
He comes to visit, gives me joy.
I feel him close, the real mccoy.

As close as is sin-lust homemade;
My one knight - my handsome star
I drink his dusty star-beams by day,
Making his love near, never far.

At night he watches me undress
I show through open window,
my star lights each room by night
with beams of his wanton lust glow.

Once he’s in, the curtain’s drawn.
We love until the dawn.
Then in my daytime hours I cry,
each time I hear a lullaby.

I live only for the nights he's here
the rest of the time I am just hanging on.
My body knows when that time draws near
because it is cloudless and I see clear and far,
the heavens release my lover's star.




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Old 02-17-2008, 04:14 PM
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Perfection!!

WOW! Superb collaboration everyone!!

I can't believe that I missed this one.
I have always been a star gazer and this poem was Great!!
This is indeed a masterpiece of pleasure.
I had to re-read it many times. I think when we collaborate these poems they develop into a beautiful piece of written art!

Let's continue to collaborate with each other. The creativity is priceless!!

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Oh my! Can't believe I haven't responded to this beauty - What a collabo - I like it lots - It's so great to see such talent working together for the ultimate goal of creating such beautiful artistry! Well done EVERYONE

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