MsJacquiiC

MsJacquiiC

LOL - This write is just CRAZY lol - It was much fun doing no doubt - And while I was hoping MS GAIL would summon the epitome of "orgasm" the the ending lines - somehow the dog taking notes is fitting in some very insane sort of way

But this is a very good write LADIES - thanx for sharing your creativity!

JAcquii.

butchiesmom

OMG, I didn't notice it wasn't commented on until MsJ brought it up, so here's my comment...who let the damned dog in the room?

That's what ya get for tagging me, lol.

hugs,
Gail

SarahNSH

Wow, this poem is just too great. I just can't say much besides that, wait, I lied because I love to talk so I can talk more but this is just brilliant with the sensual images, sexuality, and then the end stanza which kind of kicks you on your ass and you kinda just fall over laughing with the kick on the ass and the last line.

This just a smart, clever, and witty write right here... and the humor is well-done. I have a huge problem with putting humor in a poem, it's just hard, and if it happens it happens without me even trying to. I think if I try it just is forced and isn't funny. But this isn't forced, it's funny, and rather hilarious, yet, the rest of the poem definitely gets you quite heated as well.

Which is why the last stanza is such a kick in the ass. But, I just loved this, and I think I'm gonna read it again and again because I enjoyed it that much. Great job! I think I might just reading this all over again and comment again, but right now I'm on my ass from this whole thing and I'm loving it.