The Cannibalistic Woman

SarahNSH

Hello again!

I must say, with reading your first poem and now this one that you have this way with your poem and rhyming in it that is easy and effortless, without being forced at all. And, like your other poem this has a darkness to it which is more apparent than the first one which I really do enjoy and I like the dark edge to it. And the rhyming with your poem just ties it all up nicely and every line just flows from the beginning to the end. And, again, you have a great ending for your poem and I love the last line of your poem that just packs a punch at the end.

Altogether I enjoyed reading this poem and can't find any line or lines to pick out as a favorite because overall it reads very strongly. I'm glad that I came across this and thank you for sharing!

The Cannibalistic Woman

Well thank you for the great feedback The dark edge tends to add more to it, and I like to make them enjoyable with the easy flow, which it seems to have done for you. Thanks again