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Miscellaneous Have a poetic style of your own? Have poems that defies all conventional categories? Share them here please. (i.e. dark & bitter, political, revolutionary, abstract, etcetera...)

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Old 08-08-2008, 05:08 PM
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Descending into a void of painted smiles and inner despair
Wracking knife-sharp nails through smoke tinted air
Giggling in heightened anger whilst smothering the flame
Trudging through the vulnerability of unsheathing my soul for fame
Slackening my lips into a melancholy pout
Disgracing my wisdom for a death enhancing route
Mingling with ignorance; struggling to internally succeed
At disentangling myself from this orgasmic wild weed
That seeps into my flesh; a permanent tattoo
Dulling my intellect while I'm trying to thrive without you
Jolting my sense into numb self-survival
Glaring into the abyss of this cave-like hole
Nudging my creative voice to further its evolution
While it drags through this constant pollution
Singing of lost moons gracing clear, bright skies
As I attempt to separate life’s truth from its lies.
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Old 08-09-2008, 12:53 AM
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Hello Anonymous Encounter!

Well, I overall enjoyed reading and coming across this poem of yours. This poem, to me at least, shows a little of inner conflict with the imagery in it and has a darkness to it as well. While the ending of this poem kind of shows possibly that the darkness kind of clears with the mention of the clear bright skies. So, maybe this signifies the clearing of thoughts so that you can finally see between the truth and lies?

Anywho, I enjoyed this and thanks for sharing!



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actually the bright skies mentioning was more of a remnisce to when things were simple and the last line thickens it once more. i have a few adjustments to make on this poem to smooth it out, but thank you for the read.
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"Trudging through the vulnerability of unsheathing my soul for fame"
that line is pretty class!
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thank you that is how i feel about my writing, especially poetry.
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I must say your use of metaphor is simply spectacular! Nice write Anonymous!



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