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Old 07-09-2006, 01:50 PM
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A World to Waste!

This is another that came from a little writing session with my girlfriend.

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engulfing you with its toxic waste,
a world where the power is held by the few.
plastic lives, plastic wives
a world of the lonley,
a world with its mouth taped shut.

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a world of the lonley,
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Hey MATTO - I must say - I'm beginning to enjoy these 'writing sessions' with the girlfriend.

Very interesting commentary on the tedium of loneliness & the utter despair of not being of the 'elite'

I'd really like to see the writing session that made such words come to life in its entirety.

Nice piece - Thanx for sharing it!

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matto don't know if you still go to thsi site but i thought your poem was fantastic
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I'm still around, just havent had much time to post the last month or so.

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great hope to see mor eof your poetry as the last poem I read from you stuck in my head and was enjoyed by me thorougly
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