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Revisions All revised works initially posted in the Critique Saloon need to go in this section.
"is this an abstract" revised

Ambiguity Reigneth
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Ambiguity Reigneth

Abstractness slides without awareness
confusion's susceptibility anon
upended unfairness... in Inverness
lying near long mysterious Loch Ness
wide, deep, frothy, fathomless
bluish brackish existence... subdivided
through love's revolving door floats
one..."the" only...mysterious Nessie
for so, so long so lonely...
calling sky spaced above, dark and bluesey
dare to rise! daring upon ancient gods to thrive
peeking daisies chatter live...how they strive,
how they unerringly survive! for a short while?
Bowing heads to God, He roams!
butterfly covens - barrage of wings tight
florescent sights - invigorating flight
beauteous flurries, increasing and decreasing.
Enter nether regions of Beowulf's cage
anointed, enraged... pacing thunderous thighs!
Exigencies of war
dissolution in depths of darkened artifacts
cultural hatred
collapsible civilizations
atone for Grendel, hailed aloft on a splendorous night
dense monasteries, murky upon lonely moors
prepare one and all to fight.



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