RevisionsAll revised works initially posted in the Critique Saloon need to go in this section. I need spelling errors and things fixed for review for microhorror
He Strolled By
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He Strolled By
He Strolled By
The sight that night came along,
unbeknownst fear with a pattern of death.
He would just stroll by casually, carelessly,
until he got what he wanted.
He was a soul-feaster, who marked out the best blood he could find
and drained it through the tongue from their skull.
And?..... Your wondering what people did about him.
They simply hoped their blood wouldn't become his.
Last edited by erikestabrook; 03-03-2008 at 06:18 PM.
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Erik....love this as I love the dark and horrid as we know. Glad to be of help. It was nice to see you explore another genre and post! Great job and good luck with MicroHorror!
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