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Saxophone Love V
Saxophone Love V--Revision #1

His mouth fills up with notes of me
reminiscing as if my thighs
were joined with pearls.

Belting out a long
...sensual wail
from his Soprano Brass Horn.

He blows down the ride
of my breasts
up the arch of my spine
and in the pearl of my thighs.

When the serenade was over
he moistend his lips
while inhailing
more sweet air

To get a second wind

To play for me again



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