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Old 04-27-2008, 01:51 PM
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What a fairy Tale,
The mother is the evil witch in disguise. She was obviously jealous of something; evil witches are made of it. That is why they are usually green, green with envy or greed or a little of both. I think they are related. Perhaps the child had a gift her mother could have shared had she not acted on her emotion. She thought the only way she could possess the gift is to do away with the child. And so ends another lesson in Fairy Tale land or maybe not... maybe Belle was rescued. I mean, how could it be true? We just don't know the truth of the story yet.

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Thanks for viewing and commenting Jolie. Tis fiction indeed. I wanted to end the story this way to see the reaction I would get, and yes, I have a part II...but am saving it a bit, to work out some details.

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Chris Cross will make you "Jump, Jump!"

The Daddy Mack will make you "Jump, Jump!"
Painted Diary will make em, "Jump, Jump!"
Un hunh Un hunh
You wrong for this one!
It was Horribly Good!

P.S. You should write a part II where Belle does the bank head bounce and doesnt tragically die but comes back for revenge with a list of her own.
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The Daddy Mack will make you "Jump, Jump!"
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Un hunh Un hunh
You wrong for this one!
It was Horribly Good!

P.S. You should write a part II where Belle does the bank head bounce and doesnt tragically die but comes back for revenge with a list of her own.

Thank you soooo much for reading nd commenting! Yup...very wrong! lol...and yes...after I write a littl more in my Chopin Murders Short Story...there will be a part II and a ver y interesting one! Thanks again for your commentary...lol...sho' nuf makem' jump!

Kim



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