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Old 11-15-2006, 02:30 AM
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A Call 2 say Goodnight

She lay there alone in her room. The soft light of the night sky was peeking through the open blinds. The ceiling fan was on, but not much air was moving. She decided to change into something more comfortable. As she reached for her gown, something caught her eye. Folded neatly across her sitting chair was his favorite shirt; she stopped and stared. Closing her eyes, picturing the last time he had wore it. She hadn’t washed it yet, so she picked it up. She buried her nose in his shirt, and held it tightly. Almost feeling his arms around her, ummhh, - thinking to herself, how she ached to have him. Quickly she slid the shirt over her head. Pulling it down was like him, moving down her body, making her yearn to be w/ him. In her mind, she could feel his kisses at the nape of her neck and across her shoulders. A quick whisper in her ear as he nibbled, on her lobe, “are you ready baby”, unable to speak, she just nods her head.
Startled for a moment by the flashing light coming from her cell phone, she becomes bashfully aware that her body’s sweetness below has started to flow. Still she found her voice to answer the phone. Hello? A deep familiar voice answers back, “Baby I just called to say goodnight”. Hey Sweetie, she responds back, I was just thinking of you, I miss you. Is that so? Taking control of the call, he says, “Baby, I want you to lie back in bed for me, as if I were there and close those pretty brown eyes”. He continues with, your man misses you too and tonight I want to show you how much. Still feeling in the mood, she complies with his request.
Ummm, baby, he says, you are so sexy to me. Can you feel me near you? My breath in your ear, my tongue as it traces along the side of your neck. Do you feel me babe? Umm huh, she replies. My body is on top of you now, moving slowly between your thighs, oohh, I love em girl. I hungrily taste your chocolate flesh, my hands gently caressing the fullness of your breast- I can hear you start to moan, yea- don’t hold back baby, I like the way that sounds. Your body, its moving wildly beneath me, your lips, I have to kiss them, my tongue needs to explore your mouth- so wet, so hot. Girl you got my nature aroused, take me in baby. Take me fast or slow, just let me inside- cuddle me in that love spot I have come to know. Lie there and just feel me, I am all yours. Say you want me boo. Do you want me? Let me hear you say it. Yes, I want you, she barely whispers. Can you feel me? Umm huh, was all she could give. Let’s come together boo. Ohh yes, are you close baby, she utters? I’m cumin baby. Come on sweetie, I feel it…yesss babbyyy. He attempts to reply, I’m…baby, I just had to Ummm…-Damn!
Both of them, coming together in a release like neither of them had experience w/ each other before. Again startled, but this time by the low humming of the dial tone, she laid the phone down. With a smile on her face, she closed her eyes; she had been satisfied. He had called, just to say “Goodnight”.
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He had called, just to say “Goodnight”.

Damn!! Ms V, what we got goin on all up in heyrah!!!!!!!!!!! I can't even commebnt..uhh..comment.....can't type right now eiber, lol. Ok, hol on, let me find my cell phone, damn!!! I don't drink, but I'ma bout to take that wine from Mr. Smiley!!!

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