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Old 06-17-2007, 03:39 PM
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Light house Memories chapter 4

Coming to the lighthouse after a busy hard working day. Alexis walks over to the lookout and sits down on the wooden bench closing her eyes and inhaling the salty sweet air. As she sits by the lighthouse as the sun begins to set her imagination seems to run wild as she sees him smiling up to her as he stands down by the bay. Then he begins to melt into the sunset at the end of this long, exhausting day. Her day-dreams are such a beautiful vision of perfection. As the tangerine sun sets just bellow the crimson and blue horizon. From the bow of the ship he watches as the glimmering beacon of the lighthouse shines through your blonde hair flowing in the breeze. She looked perfect always sitting there, when he set sail. She has the painting of that scene you he had painted for her, sitting there in the darkness under the lighthouse beacon. She likes to sit there because, every time the pungent scent of sea salt is suspended in the nighttime air. She thinks of the sweltering summer nights Spent with her captain on the golden, sandy beaches. Every time she hears the gentle, frothy waves crashing against the radiant shore of sea glass. She thinks of the lively afternoon picnics they shared on the vivacious boardwalk.. Every time she sees the seagulls fly in flocks through the indefinite September skies. Every time she feels the sand of the beaches feeling the cool wet sand under her bare feet. She thinks of how she'll never experience such a wonderful seaside intimacy again. She remembers the blissful times spent embraced kissing and the caresses of ecstasy that always enchanted him to fall into a deep peaceful slumber in her arms being held like a security blanket. She tries to hold on to the memories of those very special moments as drowsiness captures her and drift slowly away encased together underneath the brilliant sparkling stars.

Tonight sitting on the beautiful soft lush thick green lawn the air smells unbelievably clean. As she tugs at the bottom of her sweater to adjust it from the light breeze that flows in from the sea. The last bit of sunlight hits the small rippling waves. Glimmering in the dark blue waters. She hears a dog barking in the distance, but she resists giving it attention enabling her to continue her reminiscing of that special place there she can be with her lover. We’ll be together once again my love, She softly whisper holding him in her arms. The sun now completely lost to the horizon which seems to color the sky a brilliant fiery red like the flames burning under a rocket. The scenery is one of pure bliss, a once in a lifetime vision. Birds flying overhead, an eagle, a few seagull, a couple of dove high up in the sky as time passes with darkness setting in she sits there watching him walk slowly away a brilliant majestic light shining through his hair, then he turns to her whispering into the breeze “My love you are the most beautiful love I have ever had” Blowing her a kiss. Crying she screams out to the sea We’ll be together again my love and
............................................. “ I’ll always be your one and only”
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Old 06-22-2007, 03:03 PM
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Dear Bear:

A perfect ending to a perfect story!!! I was mesmerized by your words. Indeed a beautiful romantic love story that captured this reader into breathless wonderment. Enticing me to continue the story to the end.
SUPERB!! Thanks for sharing. I LOVED it!!!

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Thank you so much Sally for this wonderful loving comment I try to make my stories visual as if your there and so happy that you loved the story
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Dear Bear,

A very majestical romance, and love story indeed. The ending was perfect. They will meet again, as this is a one-of-a-kind love that only comes once in a lifetime. If one did not believe in this before they will after reading this. My attention was completely wrapped up in this story from Chapter one to the end. I loved how you used the elements of the setting of this story itself to bring even more life to it, and more authenticity, if you will. The sunlight through his hair, whispers trailing along the breeze, the light house, the birds, the sea...all were used as a catalyst brilliantly. Loved this Bear tremendously! You are extremely talented and we are blessed to have you here, and to share with us. Please do not stop. You are an amazing Romance writer from your heart and soul. You make me know and believe that true love really is out there and attainable.

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WOW Blushing thank you so much Painted for your fantastic comment I tried to use everything I could to highlight the romance of the story to bring a truth and wonderment from the begining to the end, thenk you so much
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