"Mystery Passage." - Poetry in Color Forum
 


Poetry in Color Forum




Welcome To The JPiC Community.





All times are GMT -4. The time now is 02:48 AM.
Official Forum Language Is English. Translate Below:
Click Here To Join JPiC Forum.

Kewl Stuff JPiC Radio Daily Horoscope JPiC Arcade Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read
    JPiC Portal » Main Forum Index » Shades Of Fiction » Short Stories

Short Stories This forum is for short stories. Post your original works of 300 words or less here.

"Mystery Passage."
this thread has 2 replies and has been viewed 426 times


Post New Thread  Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 12-31-2006, 08:54 AM
  post #1
Contributor

stardust's Avatar

stardust Is The Original Thread Starter
Last Online: 10-31-2008 07:18 PM
A/S/L:
Join Date: Aug 27 2006
Posts: 766 Threads: 147
Member Blog Entries: 2
Thanks: 0
Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts
stardust has not championed any arcade games.
Instant Message Info Is Private.
"Mystery Passage."

"Mystery Passage."

Imagine, you were a friend of the writer...What would you say to the writer??By the way, I must tell you about what happened to a friend of mine the other day.
One Summer evening, I was sitting by the open window, reading a good but rather frightening mystery story. After a time, it became too dark for me to read easily, so I put my book down and got up to switch on the light. I was just about to draw the curtains as well, when I heard a loud cry of "Help!! Help!!" It seemed to come from the trees at the end of the garden. I looked out, but it was now too dark to see anything clearly. Almost immediately I heard the cry again. It sounded like a child, although I could not imagine how anybody could need help in our garden, unless one of the boys of the neighbourhood had climbed a tree and could not get down. I decided, however, that I ought to go out and have a look in the garden, just in case someone was in trouble. I took the flashlight which we keep for going down into the cellar, where there is no electric light, and picked up a strong walking stick, thinking that this might come in useful, too. Armed with these, I went out into the garden. Once again, I heard the cry. There was no doubt that it came from the trees at the end of the garden. "Who´s there??" I called out as I walked, rather nervously, down the path that led to the trees. But there was no answer. With the help of my flashlight, I examined the whole of that part of the garden and the lower branches of the trees. There was no sign of anybody or anything. I came to the conclusion that someone was playing a rather silly joke on me. Still feeling rather puzzled, I went back to the house and put away the flashlight and the stick. I had just sat down and begun to read my book again, when I was startled by the cry of "Help!! Help!!", this time from right behind my shoulder. I dropped my book and jumped up. There, sitting on top of the mantelpiece, was a large green and red bird. It was a Parrot!! While I was out in the garden, the bird must have seen the light in my room and flown in through the open window.
What did the writer feel by writing this little mystery story??...
stardust is offline   Reply With Quote
JPiC Forum Sponsor Links • This Forum is enhanced with content-revelevant advertisings...
JPiC Whole-Post Ad Policy
Whole-Post advertisings are shown only to JPiC Forum For Writers' Guests. Once successfully registered, such ads will not be shown. CLICK HERE to register your 100% FREE JPiC account today and become an active Member of our Community for Poets & Writers!

Your Ad Here

Old 02-26-2007, 11:56 PM
  post #2
Moderator

nomadicrhymer's Avatar

My Mood:
Real Name: Therese
Last Online: 11-19-2008 06:28 PM
Location: San Dimas, CA
A/S/L:
Join Date: Nov 14 2006
Posts: 1,929 Threads: 121
Member Blog Entries: 2
Thanks: 8
Thanked 8 Times in 8 Posts
Biography: divorced, 4 children, 2 still at home...planning to retire in Belize soon!
Surfs The Web With:
nomadicrhymer has not championed any arcade games.
Instant Message Info Is Private.
haha! that was pretty entertaining, Ms. Stardust. A surprise there...I once had a parrot in Belize and it would repeat everything that people passing by would say. Needless to say, it was a little embarrassing sometimes, but SOOOO Funny!! then it would call out our names and we would run outside thinking someone came to visit, and lo and behold...nothing....Polly was always tricking us!

I think here the writer is feeling a little silly after having found out that no one was outside, it was just a parrot the whole time...because that's exactly what I felt when I would run to the door.

Nomad



Signed By nomadicrhymer


Forum Signatures Are Not Shown To Unregistered Guests.
CLICK HERE to Register Your Free JPiC Forum Account.

nomadicrhymer is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 03-02-2007, 04:32 AM
  post #3
Blue Mango Puppy :]

mangodroplet's Avatar

My Mood:
Real Name: Anna
Last Online: 11-19-2008 06:14 PM
A/S/L: 16
Join Date: Feb 16 2007
Posts: 932 Threads: 50
Member Blog Entries: 3
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
mangodroplet has not championed any arcade games.
Instant Message Info Is Private.
haha......i had a feeling it'd be like that.....

hmm the author just wanted something silly? :]



Signed By mangodroplet


Forum Signatures Are Not Shown To Unregistered Guests.
CLICK HERE to Register Your Free JPiC Forum Account.

mangodroplet is offline   Reply With Quote
 
Post New Thread  Reply

  JPiC Portal » Main Forum Index » Shades Of Fiction » Short Stories



Additional Options
Bookmarks

Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Forum Jump

Page generated in 0.18930 seconds with 20 queries

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53