Sebby

Six months has gone since that deadly, sinful, thrilling kiss and yet it in my head it remains.
I lie in bed at night quiet, dark, waiting..waiting for the door to open, waiting for the feel of pure adrenaline rushing through my veins, waiting for that dirty sense of excitement I feel just by knowing he's near... but knowing, with my heart heavy, that it won't be tonight.

Of course I searched for a replacement..oh i had em all, business men "keep it straight and to the point, no time for games".
Fat, greasy dole dossers "ooh baby u turn me on, give daddy sum lovin...ooh and how about a pizza after, ur treat"
And of course the conventional mr right, kind, considerate, lovin..but he wasn't mr right for me.

To me every one of these men were the same..so dull and with each one I'd find myself drifting off into my dark world, as each one clumsily clambered on, I'd remember the excitement that I used to get as HE stood over me.
As they lent over to kiss my neck I'd feel, not their slobbering lips but the cold, sharp, thrilling sting as HE sunk his teeth into my soft pale skin..my heart would race at just this memory, I could feel pounding against my chest, my breathing became hard and fast, my stomach muscles tightened..and each one thought they were the ones doin it..morons.

But each one spoiled it at the end..whether it was the business man who would lie next to me telling me of his latest conference and how much money he's made the company that week, the dole dosser who would lie patting his gigantic hairy stomach boasting how it was 100% muscle or mr right who would lie there stroking my hair, telling me how beautiful I was...they were all doin it wrong, they were all staying.

I felt like screaming at them "NO NO NO", "you're supposed to be gone".
Cos HE never stayed...HE left me waiting, HE left me wanting more..

but HE wasn't coming back.

So here I lie, alone, my heart so cold I don't know how it still works.

A lone tear rolls along my cheek but then..it freezes, as the room goes cold, my heart stops still..there's something..i don't know what, do i dare to look?

He's here!!

PaintedDiary

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SEBBY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!You had me wanting him! LOL!!!! My heart was racin a little, my eyes didn't even blink, to read this story, and it captured my 100% complete attention!!! I love the way you break down the classes of men, if you will, then refer back to them, when referencing, the dark one!!!! Girl, you better not EVER< EVER say, you are gonna stop writing, cuz the writing thing is NOT for you! I wish Sebby, that you would seriously consider getting this published, and or turning this into a Novel. Oh, it is sooo good to have you back!!!!!!! I loved this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want more, and more, and more!!!!!!!! You gave us thrill, anticipation, humor, chill, placed us there, and you make Mr. Vampire, ohhhh so sexy in this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Loved it!!!!!!

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Benny

Good grief! Beautiful work...visual and sensual and exotic...and the story of most of us men...lol. Great stuff here...wow!