When you touch me I tingle with love,
Your gentleness is from Heaven above.
I feel your love as you caress me in
your arms and, know that you love me
and all my charms.
My heart sings with songs of love as you
stroke my hair.
I close my eyes thinking of you and relax
in your arms.
My world calms and cascades around
me with peacefulness and love as your
gentle touch transforms me with love.
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Feeling Your Touch
When you touch me I tingle with love,
Your gentleness is from Heaven above.
I feel your love as you caress me in
your arms and, know that you love me
and all my charms.
My heart sings with songs of love as you
stroke my hair.
I close my eyes thinking of you and relax
in your arms.
My world calms and cascades around
me with peacefulness and love as your
gentle touch transforms me with love.
Dear Tamara,
This was ever so soothing and tranquil and sparkled with truth. Reminds me of angels watching over me...protecting me. I experimented a little with the formatting of your piece, so I hope you did not mind. I love this as well. Your poems calm me and uplift a spirit, which is beautiful in itself. (made a small correction on a word for spelling...hope you did not mind)
Kim,
I appreciate that you like my poetry and I love how you reformatted my poem. Thank you very much. I am so in love with my husband of 23 years. He has taken such gentle care of me since I became sick and he holds me every night in his arms telling me how much he loves me like it is going to be my last night with him. I like writing poetry to him and sending it to work on the computer to uplift his Spirits and let him know that I am thinking of him. Again, thank you for making it better. Sincerely, Tamara Lesley
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Kim,
I appreciate that you like my poetry and I love how you reformatted my poem. Thank you very much. I am so in love with my husband of 23 years. He has taken such gentle care of me since I became sick and he holds me every night in his arms telling me how much he loves me like it is going to be my last night with him. I like writing poetry to him and sending it to work on the computer to uplift his Spirits and let him know that I am thinking of him. Again, thank you for making it better. Sincerely, Tamara Lesley
Dear Tamara,
That is such a beautiful story and one I don't have. You are blessed and so is your hubby. You are quite welcome in regard to your poem and I look forward to reading more. Beautiful!
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Peace Tamara,
Love's truth has ennobled you and has made your poem a song of heartfelt joy. I bow low in honour of that truth, and my heart sings in fellowship with that song.
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