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Living in the Now.

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Old 04-03-2008, 08:24 AM
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Living in the Present

Living in the present and letting go of the past
will make me happier and full of love at last.

Sharing a smile and offering help will brighten
my light as God speaks to me and makes my life
worthwhile.

Knowing just what he wants me to do by
helping another will prove my love for you.

God is the great "I Am" just as he shares
his title with us; we must live for the moment
and forget about the past.

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Dear Tamara,

This was simply beautiful with a message crystal clear. One correction I see would be " we must live for the moment." Sharing a smile and offering help is what I live by, and twas great to see it scribed here. Love this and thank you for posting.

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Kim, I appreciate your delicate critiquing of my poem. Thank you very much for your thoughtful insight. Tamara Lesley
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Peace Tamara,

Truth comes in many forms. I strive to honour them all.

God bless you for a beautiful poem.

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Thank you Abdur Rahman for appreciating my poem and saying such nice things about it.
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Living in the present and letting go of the past
will make me happier and full of love at last.
The first two lines sum up the entired poem and a philosophy I wish a lot of people would follow, including myself! Life is hard enough as it is without constantly looking over our shoulders at what has already happened. It's why we are constantly tripping over obstacles life places in our path.

Inspirational poem, Tamara!
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Living in the Present

Thank you so much Gail for expressing your feelings for my poem of Living in the Present. I hope that it has helped many people to think about what the poem says and begin to live in the present and look forward to their future. Thank you. Sincerely, Tamara Lesley
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