stardust

"The Love of the Lord." Author: Stardust. (4-2008)

Unfolding the love of the Lord,
Like a rose petal, so pure, so fine,
I can feel His touch in my life,
All His love that is all mine.

I was once, on a death row.
Jesus pulled me out from doom,
And He gave me another chance to live.
Life is certainly too short!!...
So, I dream and live.
I love the Lord, our Savior!!
He gives me time to share, and love to give.

My bluish dreams, I expose,
Like unfolding a rose.
I would be the queen of hearts,
And I would transform this world
In endless full bloom of arts.

Once, the haze covered the sky
Like a big white wall.
The misty day got transformed
Into a dreadful storm.
The curtain of heartless rain
Penetrated through the windows.
I watched the view in awe,
Looking puzzled to the rainfall.
So, right then in prayers, the Lord I called...

I live one day at the time.
I use my freedom, for the hours are all mine.
This is the way I have survived.
God set a plan for me long ago.
This is how He has kept me alive.
I call the Lord in prayers, so all my foes go...
Glory!! Glory!! Hallelujah!! Hallelujah!!

Author: Stardust. (4-2008)

Mysty

Wow hon....... smoking the wacky tobaccy or just high on love of God??

Interesting poem nonetheless.

Mysty

stardust

Thank you, Mysty, for taking your precious time to read my poem and offer your comments!! It is my pleasure to answer your question. I do not smoke. I do not get high either. I believe in God. I just love and praise the Lord with all my heart, because I am the kind of Christian Catholic woman, who loves to write Spiritual and Inspirational Poems for the Lord.
Plus, I also believe that actions speak louder than words. So, I am a Christian in action...
I am also a Prayer Warrior, and a Messenger for the Lord. Would you like to join our team?? Have a blessed day!! God bless you, Mysty!!
Cordially,
STARDUST.

Tha-Emissary

Amen Stardust!

Being in the arms or the Heavenly Father is truly Being in Love because he is Love. Very Moving!

stardust

Thank you, Emissary, for taking your time to read my poem and say your comments!!
It is nice to meet you, Emissary. God blesses and embraces everyone who loves and believes in Him!! The Kingdom of Heaven is big enough to welcome all believers. When I say love, I am talking about spiritual love, the love of God.
Have a blessed day, Emissary!!
Cordially,
STARDUST.

RonPrice

Feelings in Poetry: A Comment On the Poem "the Love of the Lord" by stardust....Ron Price, Tasmania....
Barbara Hardy wrote in her book "The Advantage of Lyric: Essays on Feeling in Poetry"(1977, p.2) that: "a poetic idea is a passionate idea, warming, sustaining and generating fresh feeling." I think, I surmise, you have achieved this result in this poem. I find the core of any real success I experience in writing poetry is the generation of that same feeling. if others share in and experience that feeling--this is a bonus.-Ron

stardust

Hi Ron!!
Thank you so much for sharing your kind point of views on my poem!!
It is true what you have said about the feelings we have in writing poetry.
At this time, I´ve really wanted to convey to the readers my true love for the Lord.
It is my pleasure to meet you, Ron. I´ll be looking forward to reading your poetry.
God bless you, and those you love!!
Cordially,
Starry.