erikestabrook

Such a tingle in the ear
when the wind begins to blow

such a sound that mellow ching

good things it surely brings

dark storm clouds then arise
and ruin the sound of my lovely chimes

but when they pass the birds sing with them
a ting and chirp all in rhythm.

PaintedDiary

Dear Erik,

I really enjoyed this write. It was refreshing, had a clear message, and was quite beautiful in its short breath. The title drew me in first and then the beauty of the words. The last lines that I highlighted are priceless and ring true. Love the rhyming as well as I really do not see that in your poetry. Thank you for making me smile and feeling so warm inside. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Kim

tamm0449

What a sweet short poem, but yet it gave you a visual as if you could see it. Thank you for sharing it. Sincerely, tamm0449