Poet!! Speak up your mind!!
Don´t waste any more time!!
If the whole World is blind,
Show them the way, make them see
The Light in their lives...
And what they ought to be.
Poet!! Don´t make the utterless silence
Shut your mouth with the real truth!!
Poet, speak the language of your heart.
Don´t let people stand on the way
And make us get falling apart!!...
God wants you to lead the way,
For others to follow His grace and faith.
Poet!! Don´t let the poignant grief
Of the World full of sins
Infect your pure soul!!
The honey-dew and nectarine´s juice
Flow in every fine lace of your poetical way.
Forgetting the blues,
You lead each moment you post,
Making this World shine,
And become a positive and fine host,
Riding the rainbows in every day light.
Poet, this poem is just for you.
You make people think, laugh or cry.
Your poems may change the World too,
For you plant the seeds into new dreams,
That feed the good soil with the sunbeam.
Poet, these words are for you with the morning dew.
An everlasting glimpse of Heaven´s Poetry
To view on the stage of a poet´s heart,
It makes a carousel play the music
Into a glorious and everlasting dance.
Author: Stardust. (New Version written by 3-2008.)
(Original Version written by 11-2006.)
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Dear Ms Stardust,
This was so exhilarating and from the first word..Poet! with an exclamation mark..I read this poem out loud! Demands attention and is so vibrant with love and enthusiasm! I loved his Ms Stardust, it is full of radiance. I know where to go for truly a spiritual blast and is here in the honor in all your poetry. Love ya and take care.
Dear Ms. Kim:
Thank you so very much, for taking your precious time to read my poetry, and for offering your wise comments!! I am the one who is truly honoured by your awesome presence, sweetheart. I wrote this poem for ALL POETS, for you and for all... It is so important to speak the language of your heart. So, this is exactly what I have been doing at the Forums. My poems may not be so perfect in structure, rhymes or metrics, but they do convey a true message -from my heart of hearts- to the whole World. At least, this is MY TRUE DREAM!! I also love your poetry and stories, dear Ms. Kim.
Kind Regards,
Starry.
Biography: Jacquii Cooke is a 32 year old Black Poet from Oak Ridge, Tennessee. As Webmistress of Poetry in Color Forum, she is devoted to the more abstract styles, especially those with a strong feminine voice that center around the topic of redemption and righting the wrongs of past transgressions.
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Originally Posted by stardust
The honey-dew and nectarine´s juice
Flow in every fine lace of your poetical way.
Wow! I love how you made this poem into a chant, a mantra of sorts MS STARRY and I love how empowering this write is. You have managed to say "I believe in you, do your thang Poet" --- It's a message that many could really use - I thought it was really good and a personal message that makes me smile.
Dearest Ms. Jacquii:
OH!! I am so HAPPY now!! V.I.P., very important people like yourself are reading my poem. Wooowww!!! It is outstanding, sweetheart. The important message that I convey is that, Poets, should speak the language of their hearts, and should let the whole World listen to the words of wisdom of their poems. That is a true message that I hold in my heart of hearts for ALL POETS. Thank you, Ms. Jacquii, for reading my poem, and for replying with your kind message!!
Send you my warm regards always, and God bless you, Ms. Jacquii!!
Cordially,
Starry.
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Aw Shux! Thanx MS STARRY - I don't know about being V.I.P. LOL - Just being MsJacquiiC is all - and love the message of your poem! Thanx again for sharing it with us
Ms. Jacquii:
What I´ve been trying to say before is that, you make me feel important, when you read and reply to my poems. It means that my poems are worth. You have a special touch to make people feel so good about themselves, when you offer your comments. You see, I am not a professional writer, I just write with my heart. If people like what I write, it makes me feel good and encouraged to keep on writing. If people do not say anything, it means that my poems are nothing worth to read. Anyway, thanks a million for replying to me!! Your words of encouragement are so important for all Poets in here. I put my idea in a nutshell, if my poems mean something to somebody, they will mean the whole World to me. That is all!! Thank you again, Ms. Jacquii for sharing your point of views with me!!
Cheers,
Starry.
"Poet, Speak Up Your Mind!!"
