Spiritual PoemsGot poetry that celebrates spirituality? Post them in this forum. **NOTE** Religious poems acceptable here as well. looking for feedback this is my newest poem
Two Cents and a Stain
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Two Cents and a Stain
You ask me what I've gained,
split apart and refrained,
what's left of me? two cents and a stain,
part of me wants to remain,
there's one way of dousing the pain,
you ask me what I've gained,
blank tapestries feign,
to abhore you more, I can be vane,
what's left of me? two cents and a stain,
putting me above the blame,
once again the repenter of names,
you ask me what I've gained,
I guess only time would tell?
lanterns stretch above my frame,
what's left of me? two cents and a stain,
no time to fall in love again,
no time whatsoever to my name,
you ask me what I've gained,
what's left of me? two cents and a stain.
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Biography: I have my own website now erikestabrook.com, I hope you'll meet me there as well
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thanks Joy, everything I write has to as least feel meaningful to me,
the imagery makes this poem meaningful,
I think most will interpret this as a death afterlife scenario,
and thats what it meant as,
its got a main message though,
you get outta life what you put in,
and you have to look past your own eyes or eveything will be oblivious to you
Dear Erik:
I love reading your work of art. Your poem is lovely!! I enjoy so much reading your work. You are an amazing Poet, Erik. Thank you for sharing your poetic talents with us!! Well, I take this special moment to wish you: Merry Christmas and Happy New Year 2008, to you and your loved ones!!
Warm Regards, Starry.
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Dear Erik,
Very nice work with the rhyming and flow. Yes, the message is clear....we cannot close our eyes to the small doses of blessings in life as well. Loved this as well.
