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Old 06-14-2009, 08:36 PM
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When

grievous utterance
with a grimace of anathema
and I was supposed to keep loving you

jabs and vocal blows
contempt dripping with each spoken word
and I was supposed to keep loving you

what happened to us?
we used to dance and laugh
we used to go out and come back in
to spend hours loving each other tender.

when did the hating begin
and the loving end?
when was us
over
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Old 06-17-2009, 03:27 AM
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Aw! I so wanna cry. I've been having a rough time of love lately - I so want things to work out - I don't think there is any other option, as I cannot in reality ever think that our love could ever fade. I just won't have it except for the happy ending and willing am I to do anything to make my soulmate and my love something that beautiful poetry is made of. I want the happy ending and the kisses and the midday loving and nitetime rendezvous when we hide from the world and laugh with each other after a bit of raucous and furious lovemaking so tender it'd hurt a god's eyes to watch it...

But oh my - Your poem Mysty makes me want to cry to think that such a thing could be the outcome of such frivilously optimistic hope that I have so deep within my soul...

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ooh Ms J.....honey this can't be about your relationship ..no way.... it is about mine and this one was over along long long time ago hon.. I am cool with this....no longer hurt about it... in fact I have me a new delicious man..... he is so ...... delicious !!!


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