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Old 05-03-2008, 03:21 AM
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Breathe
Breathe

Every breath you take
is precious
breathe
oh breathe on, my love
sweetly
softly
tenderly
gently
a pinkened cheek
crushed by slender hand
trusting, splayed wide open
honestly
knowingly
lovingly…
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black
protecting
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of dreamy sighs
fascinate
a mother
as I…
keep watch
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Old 05-03-2008, 03:29 AM
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Ohh... is precious Nomad .. it brings to mind when my daughter was small.. I used to just sit and gaze with wonder that something so beautiful could have come from inside of me. This is going into my favorites.

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Dear Ms Nomad,

Words straight from your heart, and painted beautifully in this poem. An anthem for all loving Mothers! Tis so good to read your work Therese...one can just wrap there eyes around this poem and not blink. Tis executed beautifully in your unique Nomad style. Though I have no children, this poem will stay with me as to what the feeling is like, as it radiates with love, Thank you for posting this. Going into my favorites, excellent rating.

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Straight from your heart and beautiful expressed.
This is precious Nomad. I simply adore it, thank you*hugs*



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