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a very interesting introspect on redemption.. very well worth the read.. you can check it out!

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you never quickened at the sight
of watching the fearless
throw thier souls down in the dark...
instead you offered up a hand...
and saved them from the rest of thier fall...
when they cryed out

but i've never felt your embrace...
even as my heart quaked...
at all the misery it's wittnessed...

how i've longed to be caught up in....
the beauty of carelessness....
but fear has held me down...

carry me away from this road

let me wander down a path that never ends

let me know that this way is truely your will...

cause everything i've decided so far... has led me to the heart of hell...


how much longer can i go..
without hearing from you an answer?
how much pain must i endure?
knowing there's nothing i can do...
how many lives must i see ruined?
when you can give me something to hold on to...
some hope to shine through my soul...


i've been waiting on your voice...
and i dont know what's in the way of you...
i seek out your truth..
but it's hidden behind all the muddled confusion here....
take me away from the dark...
show the way to redemption....
it's tempting to end this all when i'm on my own....



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Last edited by bloodletting_of_the_sky; 12-03-2007 at 02:24 PM. Reason: to add a closing line.. the poem felt unending.. and to also correct some grammer mistakes... lol.... i get to quick sometime
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Old 12-03-2007, 02:26 PM
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srry everyone for not being much active.... i do have a good excuse though... i'm getting plans made and working double to save up for a trip to indiana to visit me folks for christmas.... i think that's a good enough excuse.. lol....
anyways.. my apologies for my inactivity...

and please check this write...



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