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Old 09-17-2007, 11:29 AM
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Eight Tears

one tear for me
one tear for you
one tear for our love
you said it was sent from God above

one tear for what was
one tear for what might have been
one tear for undying love
you said our love would last an eternity

one tear for what never will be
one last tear as I turn to leave
with my broken heart in tow
feeling like my end has come today
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Tears....this is a very poignant piece of broken promises and dreams...when hope is lost it seems as if there is nothing left...and then a little miracle creeps back into our lives...in the form of new hopes and new dreams....wonderful piece!

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hi tears of roses ... nice little poem not to mention the presentation! written from the heart i'd say so i hope that by now the tears have turned to smiles ...

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A poem that couldn't be more beautifully presented Nice piece, and i loved the picture. Thank you for sharing



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