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the emtyness
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the emtyness
the emptyness.....
echoes throughtout my mind.
Reminding me of nothing but the loneliness.
Leaving me breathless and gasping for air.
Searching for hope finding none there.
Like reciprocating circles-
they go on like echoes.
It all remains so endless, amongst this...emptyness.
Yet is as much fun as watching a circus of lonely clowns-
searching for more of nothing.
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I feel a very personal touch added to this poem when I read it. It wraps around my heart reminding me of what I have gone through in the past. The emotion feels strong yet depressed. But that is what makes this poem beautiful and enjoyable. Good work.
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Hey Man... whatz-up?! Thanks for reading and i'm glade you enjoyed this write!
By the way, thanks for the shout-out... yeah I made the century mark finally and it feels great! Thanks again sir and I will look for ya out here in the JPIC!
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cool keep up the posting Curtis,
one thing your title in the main section is spelled emtyness instead of emptyness,
I'd fix it before you send it to publishers or just for here it should be fixed,
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