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Old 04-23-2008, 11:30 PM
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Enlightened Echo
The Universe
Of mystery and illumination
Keeps its secrets
In enlightened expanse
The stars dance
With the moon
In celestine darkness
Light plays with them
From a solar distance
Like an echo
From a far mountain
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Old 04-24-2008, 10:49 PM
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Hello!

I enjoyed reading this poem, especially with the ending of it I think that it concluded the poem well and I especially liked the last two lines "Like an echo
From a far mountain." I felt like you created good imagery by not that many words to describe what was happening with the poem, and that is great. Thank you for sharing!
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Jo, well...this poem encompasses one of my favorite subjects...the celestial bodies that silently look down upon us. Lovely and descriptive!

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So Beautiful & Serene. I'm lovin it! Dah Dah Dah Dun!
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Love the ethereal images.
Very pretty! Great capture
of the cosmos. Excellent job!


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Nightlife calls me.
Through her I am free.
It's the only way to be,
all caught up in a mystery!
Born with full moon fever,
I can make you a believer!
For I am the moonchild,
truly born to be wild!

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Old 05-20-2008, 12:23 PM
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Thanks for reading my "stuff"! I am a little behind on reading and posting these days.


mslit's Signature But even while we are talking and meditating about the earth's orbit and the solar system, what we feel and adjust our movements to is the stable earth and the changing day. (George Eliot)

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