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Old 09-12-2007, 03:27 AM
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Fat Kitty…Cat

Magical meowing
in all corners
of Olympus
fell on deaf ears
as the young goddess
Alrica dismissed the sound
of a cat's mewling cries.
They came ever closer
to her ears...loudly...but
distracted, she ignored
all, except the niggling
conscience
which was talking to her
sternly as she planned
her quick escape.
Hermes came zooming
by, throwing her a flower
quickly, with a called-out
“helloooooooo” as he
zipped up the two hundred steps
to take his latest message
to Father Zeus.
She hated the restriction
“no human lover allowed”?
What a crock!
Didn’t her very father...Zeus
bear his own boy halfling…
Hercules, proudly in his arms
upon this very hill, born of a mortal?
Showing him off, until
his angry wife…
Hera threw lightning bolts
trying to kill the god/child?
She was in love! Didn’t that count
for something? Would they ever
understand? Parents!!
The meowing grew louder and louder
"is that a cat?" she thought
as she strode briskly
along to the rendezvous
to meet Cyrus…her very own
human... like no other…
Greek…he was, and
fine of form, dark curls brushing
his brown shoulders…the bluest
of eyes could have only come from
a god-gift bestowed to his parents.
Pondering, she slowly entered
the cave and came face to face with…
a fat pussy...cat! Guarding six kittens
splendorous white coat bristled
angrily as he bared sharp white teeth.
One horrified moment passed as Alrica
thought “No!” “They would not dare turn him
into a cat!!?” But she searched for hours
And never found her Cyrus….
ever again.

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Oh my what?!! Bad, stupid, funny, off the wall crazy?



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I think I understand this and goofy comes to mind,
you used the god's in very humorful fashion



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Old 09-13-2007, 01:22 AM
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Thanks for reading and commenting Erik...yes...goofy mood wrote this...

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Old 09-13-2007, 01:47 AM
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I have no clue what that meant...still confused about any connection to a fat pussy this had, but i'm not all that bright sometimes. lol

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It came from MY mind...nuff said! just a regular poem of a girl complaining because her dad (the god Zeus) won't let her see the guy she likes...then she found out he's been turned into a fat pussycat! She's thinking of going to meet him, when all the while the cat's mewing like crazy, trying to attract her attention...then she finally bumps into him.

Was that sooo hard? Ok...I know I think weird...so... uhuh, ok.

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