The First Flower - Poetry in Color Forum
 


Poetry in Color Forum
Donation Goal For Private Hosting 2009
Help us get better hosting = make your donation today!
We Have Received $0 Towards Our Goal Of $750
0% Of Our Goal Has Been Reached




Welcome To The JPiC Community.





All times are GMT -4. The time now is 02:31 PM.
Official Forum Language Is English. Translate Below:
Click Here To Join JPiC Forum.

Kewl Stuff JPiC Radio Daily Horoscope JPiC Arcade Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read
    JPiC Portal » Main Forum Index » Poetic Colours » Spoken Word & Freestyle

Spoken Word & Freestyle Poems meant for poetry slams and other spoken word venues, as well as freestyle & experimental forms of poetry should be placed here.
A prose-poem that draws an analogy between the first flower and....?

The First Flower
this thread has 2 replies and has been viewed 206 times


Post New Thread  Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 04-16-2008, 08:02 PM
  post #1
Mr Ron Price

RonPrice's Avatar

RonPrice Is The Original Thread Starter
Real Name: RonPrice
Last Online: Today 01:05 AM
Location: George Town Tasmania
A/S/L: 64
Join Date: Mar 22 2008
Posts: 45 Threads: 17
Member Blog Entries: 4
Thanks: 4
Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts
Biography: married for 41 years, a teacher for 35 years and a Baha'i for 49
Surfs The Web With:
RonPrice has not received any JPiC Member Awards.
RonPrice has not championed any arcade games.
Instant Message Info Is Private.
The First Flower

A prose-poem that draws an analogy between the first flower and....?...your challenge to figure it out.--Ron Price, Tasmania
_______________________________

In the last months of my career as a full-time teacher, the last months of my part-time and casual teaching as well as into the early years of my full retirement from virtually all volunteer work,1 news was reported of the discovery in northeast China of the earliest flowering plants more than 124 MYA. The print and electronic media, first in scholarly journals and the popular press and then on TV,2 told us about what they called the first flower among the world’s flowering plants. Flowering plants are the dominant vegetation on the planet and they include: flowers, trees and many life sustaining crops. The field of study in which this knowledge, this specialized expertise, can be found is called palaeobotany and palaeobotany is a child, one of the multitude of children, of the Enlightenment. Its founding father was Gasper Maria von Sternberg(1761-1838).3 -Ron Price with thanks to 2the journal Science in 27 November 1998, the National Geographic News, 3 May 2002 and SBS TV, 8:30-9:30 p.m. 17 February 2008; as well as 2 Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia.

1 Except for my work with the International Baha’i community

Yes, you can learn all about this
in the world of palaeobotany, or
in a newspaper or on TV—all to
the level of your capacity and
interest. If, as it is often said,
people prefer entertainment to
edification and put a premium
on personality at the expense of
issues, they can get a quick one
TV hit of that first flower and tree
back in the cretaceous period of the
Cainozoic era in their fragmentary
forms: leaves, stems, branches, stems,
trunks, pollen, spores, seeds—all old
ancestors in the long evolutionary story
of flowers going back to dinosaur times.

But now, growing in this new age, a new
flower has begun to bloom compared to
which all other flowers are but thorns;
and, yes, a tree is now growing in the
world of existence: its boughs and its
branches, its stems and its offshoots,
its leaves and its trunk will endure as
long as those most august attributes
and most excellent titles will last,1
attributes and titles of that essence
which the wisdom of the wise and
the learning of the learned can not
comprehend--will never understand.

1 Baha’u’llah, Baha’i Prayers, Wilmette, 1985, p.233.

Ron Price
16 April 2008
(for the Poetry in Colour Forum)



Signed By RonPrice


Forum Signatures Are Not Shown To Unregistered Guests.
CLICK HERE to Register Your Free JPiC Forum Account.

RonPrice is offline   Reply With Quote
JPiC Forum Sponsor Links • This Forum is enhanced with content-revelevant advertisings...
JPiC Whole-Post Ad Policy
Whole-Post advertisings are shown only to JPiC Forum For Writers' Guests. Once successfully registered, such ads will not be shown. CLICK HERE to register your 100% FREE JPiC account today and become an active Member of our Community for Poets & Writers!

Old 04-16-2008, 11:46 PM
  post #2
Moderator

Mysty's Avatar

My Mood:
Real Name: Mysty
Last Online: 12-01-2008 08:41 AM
Location: Canadian Prairies
A/S/L: 46
Join Date: Nov 1 2006
Posts: 916 Threads: 68
Member Blog Entries: 2
Thanks: 10
Thanked 14 Times in 13 Posts
Biography: Am a Mom extraordinaire.... my kids just don't want to leave home.
Mysty has not championed any arcade games.
Instant Message Info Is Private.
Hmm, would it be...... something that was offered as a peace offering in those times so long ago? No I have not read about it in the newspaper..... I rarely read them....and no I have not seen it on the news on tv... I rarely watch tv and never the news. Why? Because it is never good news... and what isn't good is bad and bad hurts. I do listen to others talking about what they heard in the news and if I deem it worthy ..... well I will search it out on the internet. So I know I am likely wrong but would love to know more. But I won't ask you for a hint......not unless you want to offer it.

I quite liked your prose Ron... thought provoking it is... but I am not curious like the cat... been burned too many times ... so if you want to be generous and let me know I will not blow your secret. Just pm me I would appreciate it.

Mysty



Signed By Mysty


Forum Signatures Are Not Shown To Unregistered Guests.
CLICK HERE to Register Your Free JPiC Forum Account.

Mysty is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-17-2008, 12:06 AM
  post #3
Mr Ron Price

RonPrice's Avatar

RonPrice Is The Original Thread Starter
Real Name: RonPrice
Last Online: Today 01:05 AM
Location: George Town Tasmania
A/S/L: 64
Join Date: Mar 22 2008
Posts: 45 Threads: 17
Member Blog Entries: 4
Thanks: 4
Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts
Biography: married for 41 years, a teacher for 35 years and a Baha'i for 49
Surfs The Web With:
RonPrice has not received any JPiC Member Awards.
RonPrice has not championed any arcade games.
Instant Message Info Is Private.
You Are Getting Warm

Yes, you are on the way...but stay tuned to my poetic offerings here in the months ahead...sometimes my poems tell and are direct with no metaphors with hidden analogues.-Ron



Signed By RonPrice


Forum Signatures Are Not Shown To Unregistered Guests.
CLICK HERE to Register Your Free JPiC Forum Account.

RonPrice is offline   Reply With Quote
 
Post New Thread  Reply

  JPiC Portal » Main Forum Index » Poetic Colours » Spoken Word & Freestyle



Additional Options
Bookmarks

Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Forum Jump

Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
What's your favorite flower? Sally Roberts Forum Games 7 03-15-2008 04:06 AM
Night Flower Bear Creative Traditional 2 02-19-2008 01:55 AM
Life is like a Flower mistyllspoetry Spiritual Poems 2 10-22-2007 04:45 PM
Unloved Flower Poetry Garden Emotional Romantic 3 07-19-2007 02:03 PM
Pressed Flower AmazonPoet Emotional Romantic 2 08-30-2006 03:15 PM

Page generated in 0.94661 seconds with 21 queries

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53