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Old 04-03-2008, 02:56 AM
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Forgotten

My lips have
been alone
for such a long
time.

Hidden from
view catching
none of your
dews.

It has been
away too long
with not even
your clarion.

This constant
aching needs
your lingual
larruping.
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Old 04-03-2008, 04:54 AM
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Hi ABAE - I 1st say please update your email address - You can do so easily by clicking the Edit Profile link and then clicking the Edit Email & Password button.

But this poem you've shared is almost heartbreaking - I've cried already today - this poem only accentuates the tears I long to rid from my soul - this psoem is heartbreaking because there's such a lingering love that just wants to be caressed - the depths of your poem is heartbreaking to me. That's it.

I thank you for sharing it though.


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MsJacquii....,

Sending a thanks...
to you for reading
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