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Old 09-23-2007, 12:42 AM
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Hugs Nomad such a sad write but brilliantly written it made me want to cry and try to figure out how I could help her through her dispair.
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This poem is so deep that i actually don't much understand it TT.TT Damn....
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Sometimes we all live in a caged life, don't we? I felt much darkness and a great void in this work...wow. Pretty deep stuff here, nomadicrhymertypeladypoetessgirly.
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hi nomad ... i so hope that this is just a random person in the poem and not you ...

i think i've made it plain on this forum that i am a fanatic supporter of womens rights and childrens rights and i'd hate to try to sleep tonight believing that you are in any way unhappy ...

if it is simply you writing in another vein then it makes the poem even better than it first appears to be for you obviously have sympathy and understanding for the women who might be represented in your poem ...

well done and ..

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Jim, yes, this was just a poem...and I do sympathize greatly with the women in these situations, as well as get frustrated with those who are presented with chances to get out and don't take it...or are too scared to.

Thanks for your very nice comments, Jim!!

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This poem is so deep that i actually don't much understand it TT.TT Damn....
lol! Riha...I don't think it was THAT deep, was it? Thanks for stopping by and reading, though...tit for tat, since I still have to work on understanding "Scarlet" !!!! lol!

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Bear and Benny - thanks for your very nice comments on this piece.

Benny - yes, I think we all do feel caged in some way...that's when I go do something for just me...like dancing

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