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Old 11-03-2006, 06:10 AM
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'ere I sit in
my quasimodian bastille.
From campaniles I spy
suitors who would
approach me.
Yet from these belltowers
I could be Rapunzel
releasing locks
for all lovers
to access me.
Though they try,
in their sailboats, they will fail.
I am elusive; ever hungry,
the quintessential tease.

My island penitentiary,
meant to withhold
such a succubus as I,
fails to hold lust
from their dreams.
This tower of
Mother Earth
though hold me she does
tis not food enough.
I would be free
to love, to succor,
to feed on
all the men
who yearn for me.


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I liked the way this captures your attention. You have great style. The line's that stuck out I thought were.

releasing locks
for all lover's
to access me

to feed on
all the men
who yearn for me

You have great talent. I enjoyed this...good reading you



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Michael.....

lol not so great talented *blushes* though Thank You for thinking so ... this was a piece I did for a pic challenge. I no longer have a link to the pic as it is no longer hosted there. The Pic was named Stump .. can't quite recall the author's name of the pic. I am glad you enjoyed it Thank You again.

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You are very talented! Totally AWESOME!
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Dear Mysty,

Tantalizing, bewitching, beautifully written....just captivating!! Thank you for sharing. I absolutely love this as my mind fills with images that are so vivid, and in awe of your fantabulous talent!!

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Thank You Lanaia and Painted Diary... Your awe humbles me.


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Hungers


From campaniles I spy
suitors who would
approach me....

...I am elusive; ever hungry,
the quintessential tease.


Hey MYSTY - taking a note from MsJ's book are we? Very inspiring piece - speaks on the power of female and the power she has over her suitors...

The language has an old-english feel to it - perhaps old-french feeling lol - But I enjoyed this one immensely! Such practiced grace and skill has gone in to making this piece.... Such knowledge knowing...

Thanx for sharing this one with us!

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