santui

He caught my scent
cause i could pay the rent
looked in my eyes
and saw i was a prize
to catch
to snatch
a respite from trash

Talk was cheap
and his words were deep
enough to score
while his hands explored
i prayed
he played
a living tempo deep down

Inside of me continually
my eyes said go
my body said no
your lips were bitter
with sugar coated
kisses making my blood

Flow like a river
from kicks to licks
tits to fists
sitting in limbo
waiting for my blow
up in smoke went the us i knew
when you found another me to screw

I followed you inside her
but heard the whisper
of a falling dress
and saw only madness
I turned back the bed
turned black to red
lips bared in a smile

all the while
i carved 25 to life
with a kitchen knife
now i have a cell
version of a living hell
sharing with a bull
more buttons to pull
now heres the sitch
I loved a bastard and became a bitch

Patricia_Lynn

This piece is definitely different but speaks clear and kind of sad too. Keep up the poems Santui. Can't wait for the next.

PaintedDiary

Dear Santui,

Wow!!! This got my attention from the title on down!! What a different flavor to add to our skittle rainbow of diversity. This was smooth, quick, had a rhyme, told a story, had emotion, and you poured this little masterpiece here on JPiC's canvas. I LOVED IT!!! I will be on the look out for more of your work, I like your style very much. Thank you for sharing this!

Painted D

santui

thank you i get great inspiration reading all the great stuff thats posted everyday so it's due in part to every word thats wriiten here

Jeez

Nice with layers of feelings
feeding new senses of an
uneaten plate.

Thanks for the read.