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Old 09-06-2007, 09:01 PM
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Mists

MISTS

In sleepless haze
I drift along a sea
of poignant memories
that touched me then
and
tease me now
so that when
I fall asleep again
I dream I am still
in your arms.
Here,
where I know love
like none
I have ever felt.

I inhale scents of
musk and timbers
reminiscent of forests
in spring.
I am drawn into
eyes shaded like mists
of palest green with flecks
of gold and frosty blue.


Then
someone calls my name,
an irritated voice
and my dream is gone,
the memories sadly fade away
making me yearn
to get lost in the mist
for all time.



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Mysty, this is such a sweet "down-filled" softness of a dream, safe and on cloud nine...then it evaporates so rapidly...I can feel the mood changing...and have been there! Not that I would literally not want to wake up, but it's so nice to be in such an exquisit fantasy dream.

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Mysty.., you are so wrong!!!!!! i was flowing along your lines..,

At first, i had this image of you in bed, tossing and turning, your mind alert with thoughts of me.... (i mean of someone)..,

then, when you got to the trees, I had this wiccan image of you in the forest..,

then.... ****the damn record scratches..... and all those images fade away to mist..... and i leave you in your noisy reality, because some ingrate calls your name......

hahahaaha...

i loved it..
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*GRINS* ... Hey TBP you never know what I was thinking of lol..... that is my secret Thanks for reading hon.

Thank You J.Rose........ if anyone knows how to dream it sure is me....

And Ms Nomad lol I was there in that jarred mood soon as I got home and discovered my internet bill had not been paid and was suspended. Thank God it was pay day. And thanks for reading hon

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Haha TBP! That was a good one...lol!!

Mysty...heaven forbid! Talk about a day in hell...glad it was payday...my goodness, this thing is addicting! No wonder I can't find time to write...I'm too busy reading nowadays..

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