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To the Naked Mother & Clothing Light of My Life!
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Old 05-10-2008, 04:58 PM
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To the Naked Mother & Clothing Light of My Life!

Long time ago
I seen my ma naked down the hall
She screamed, “COVER YOUR EYES BOY!”
Thinking that I hadn’t seen
What she’s got
But I closed my eyes anyways
Because she was teaching
Teaching me not to look with eyes
But to look with heart
To one day find a woman that
Was just as powerful as she
A woman that I respected
And Admired as much as her
That I’d be willing to go momentarily blind for her
To see how great women are
To witness how they are truly
Our last lights in the
Middle of the Darkness.

Happy Mothers Day to All the Beautiful & Motherly Guiding Lights!
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Old 05-10-2008, 08:50 PM
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A beautiful and very orignal tribute.
I love the meaning in your last lines.
Well done!


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Nightlife calls me.
Through her I am free.
It's the only way to be,
all caught up in a mystery!
Born with full moon fever,
I can make you a believer!
For I am the moonchild,
truly born to be wild!

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Old 05-11-2008, 10:18 AM
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haha this is comical and cute.interesting perspective i like it.


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Our mind's intimate; our flesh kissing
Thoughts mingling; emotions chiming
Love rhyming
Imperfect timing.

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