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Old 06-23-2008, 11:53 AM
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Omega Woman

S leeping beauty wakes in horror
to find herself
costumed as Snow White.
The prince is white faced
red sores and worms
wiggle to kiss.

White screams,
runs through a thicket
eyeballs dart as birds
to paintball target.

She courses path of ruins
to a small village,
checks in, signs
Juliette Capulet cast as Omega woman.

She bolts the doors,
changes to something revealing,
pours a drink
and sits on the balcony.

Tears run down her face
as she as she snaps the cartidge
into the Beretta automatic.

A wishing well centers court below
statue to a littered fairytale.
Brooms lie burnt
as worn torches to light city nights.
A copy of Seventeen
flips pages in dry gusts
to desert a scene.

White extinguishes a cigarette
and waits for nightfall.



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Old 06-23-2008, 03:18 PM
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This is so original and creative Jolie.
You said you appreciate my talent, well
I appreciate yours too. I really enjoyed this
for it's uniqueness. Nice twist to the stories.
Well done!



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I thought I'd try something different for a change. I kind of like it.



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