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Old 10-31-2006, 10:00 PM
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Political? theme on spring
Political? theme on spring

I endeavor to write a poem
of simple Autumn colours,
but my mind simply refuses; Akin
is golden, orange, crimson marriage.

For all?
Perhaps I should simply die.

Perhaps the simple Autumn colours
are more than my simple
mind dare endeavor understand.

Perhaps I'm a pimp
with no fashion-sense, nor dollars
to buy anonymous & decripid souls.

Perhaps I should hand out candy
with sharp chocolate
in it. Love for decrepid souls
equals hope for other types.

Perhaps I should simply die.
Tricks or Treats?
I ask innocently, the joy
of naivete part of my lonesome.

Blows my mind to think we...
Talent enough to declare Pluto:
itty bitty star. War?

Perhaps I should simply die?
Perhaps I should endeavor to write
a poem about Spring.


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Lots of questions lying in those words! Wish I had some answers...dang me! Appreciated the thoughts they gave me...now, I need a shrink to help me further...lol
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tehehehe - where the hell did this one come from? lol
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This was a very powerful piece I thought. That asked the question? Should one die or endeavor to write a poem about spring? I say that we should live. Spring is great. I love the color's. Make's you want to get your freak on.

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This poem is me saying "I sure would love to sit majestically and enjoy the beauty of fall, but how can I when family sits lingering not too far away, wanting me to die?"

Thus the last 2 lines... Saying essentially - "I shan't ever give up... My heart won't let me, plus I'm still in love with the majestic beauty of Mother Nature..."

So you are indeed correct in a sense MIKE - I sure would like to get my freak on But with who? ----> is really the question!

Thanx YAWL for taking the time to read this bit about my dreadful life!

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