bloodletting_of_the_sky

Mysty

Hiya Phillip,

First welcome back and second ... WOW what a poem to come back with .... doesn't it just say it all for the middle and lower classes? Outlining the fight and struggle we face everyday. I heard poor paris hilton is not going to inherit 100 million from her grandpappy anymore... he is donating 97 percent to charity. So the poor. world class famous whore will only get a paltry 5 million. Dear god how will she ever survive. Call her Lilith, the devils madam. Anyways ........ awesome poem..... just think what that 5 million could do for you or me..or any of us down here in the real world. lol .... kinda puts a different perspective on things hmm?
Loved this poem and giving it an excellent rating.

Mysty

bloodletting_of_the_sky

hey mysty.. not much of a comeback huh? srry i missed your birthday hun.. but thank you mucho for stoppin' by and sayin' hi anyways lol... yeah i didnt really think of this write at the time to be directed in such a manner towards media public like paris, but now that i read over it againe... it certainly has that kind of feel to it.. and i didnt even realize it...
hugs for the new year.... i've got great ambitions that are most likely to fail.. but it's worth a shot... praying currently for a positive outlook...

hassassin

hey, I'm just wondering what the poem is about? The lines confuse me...some could be blamed on typos, but "...Truth lights bright..."? I don't really get the message...I liked the beginning, but I dunno...I don't feel the theme of respect's myth was expressed enough...Lol, it's good...but I can't read it without getting confused on what you're trying to say exactly

Mysty

Hassassin have you ever heard the phrase .. Truth is a beacon? Truth lights bright is a play on this .. It means Truth is so obvious it is like a light you cannot miss and it leads the way to whatever answer one is hoping to find, be it at the end of a rainbow or at the end of a battle. Hope this helps you some.

Mysty

crazymamma5

I liked the poem. But would check your spelling so it is an easier and more flowing read.

butchiesmom

I was going to copy and paste and correct the misspelling because that's my only pet peeve but then I thought, Wait a minute! He's talking about imperfection and how we all fall short of it even though we keep trying. Maybe the misspelling isn't an error but another statement because the rest of it seems to have no problem.

What a way to make a statement! Really great job and a message all should read and understand. Thank you for opening my eyes, lol.

hugs,
Gail

hassassin

yeah, was not aware of that phrase. Thanks

bloodletting_of_the_sky

hello everyone againe.. thank you all so much for such interesting outlooks, and encouraging remarks.... some things i was not aware of myself consciencously untill i read it over myself... i often do this... i write whats on the top of my mind at the time.. and i feel