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Old 01-12-2008, 06:08 AM
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What is a penny when it comes to cents?
what is love when it comes to sense?
Do you wanna take it all back?
Well if you want it so badly baby
you're gonna lose my love.

Am I crazy
lacking sense
spending dollars
and saving all my cents
running so fast outta time
blowing my mind
how much I love you
and here I am
with my heart
beating on top of my shirt
for all to see.

What is a penny when it come to cents?
what is love when it comes to sense?
Do You wanna take it all back?
Well if you want it so badly baby
you're gonna lose my love.

Dancing feet;
body bouncing off the walls
heart beating in time
rocking with my feet.
Spending to give
giving to spend
more time with you,
maniacally spinning
dreams become reality
nightmares are fading fast
I am deep in love with you.

But what is a penny when it comes down to cents
and what is love when it comes to sense?
Do you wanna take it all back?
Well if you want it so badly baby
take my love and bury it.


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great concept and development of that concept, the middle verses were
refreshing as they added mystery and one thing I gathered from the poem is
we don't wanna be a spent dollar of love



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I truly think.... no one ever does want their love to be thought of as currency. You nailed it Erik.

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