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Old 12-11-2007, 06:33 AM
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Poem inspired by Spark Your Creativity #17 (Personification Challenge)
Try it - it's a wonderful writing exercise

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Short Blueblack Stain

stained. stained am i. motionless
as the antarctic dripping sickles of motionless water. frozen
in time where there's nothing but heartachen momentum.
i cry myself to sleep in daytime hours.

blue. blue am i. an icesickle of sorts; you can call
me a stalactite.

on the heir of notoriety i sit
collecting dust like vampiric must; i'm like guano
in the dewy dawn of morning:
shit of the ages, only rock
solid and dispensable like wetness.

ha. i'm almost liquid
if you look closely and relate like yesteryear.

do you know Me?



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Old 12-15-2007, 10:08 PM
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I am speechless....just When I grow up I want to write like you...lol...
Ms Jacquii this is profoundly intricate woven with geometric pearls. Love it!

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Ms J... Outstanding!!!

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on the heir of notoriety i sit
collecting dust like vampiric must; i'm like guano
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shit of the ages, only rock
solid and dispensable like wetness.
Just Outstanding work. I agree totally with Kim.

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I thank you LADIES so much for commenting my lonely poem.
I thought I'd give a nother try towards the writing exercises, as I know I've been a little incogNegro

I hope you both appreciated my "HA!" moment
this poem is one of my personal favorites of my own LOL
I sort of like the "shit of ages" and "stalactite" lines if I do say so meself.

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I sort of like the "shit of ages" and "stalactite" lines if I do say so meself.

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LOVING the word "stalactite"......lol

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haha - well when I was a.... erm in.... "scouting" - I did my fair share of spelunking.... Well I never was a scout - I was actually a Y-Trail Blazer truly..... But anyway - I suppose I could go in to a diatribe about the distinctions between stalactites and stalagmites ---- Don't even get me started MS KIM

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