Sealiah

So many feelings that surge in the heart
So many emotions that tear me apart
So many whispers that go on unheard
So many dreams lying like wing-broken birds.

Mists keep on rolling and hiding the sight
Mists keep on muffling the sounds of the night
Heartbeats unanswered cry on in their pain
Heartbeats snuffed out every night and all day.

Walls keep us separate and cage up our souls
Walls keep us scratching for a drop of pure gold
Walls keep us screaming for a moment of pleasure
Walls keep us waking with fears without measure.

Break Free! I say while bashing on doors
Break Free! I scream while slipping on floors.
Run run away when you find a single time
Run far away so that you are mine.

Moonchild

Usually repitition doesn't work for me
but in this poem it did. The only nit I have
is if you're going to rhyme make sure you rhyme all the words
cause it throws off the rhythm. I liked this though