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Old 07-15-2008, 03:42 PM
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A Study in L
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Luminous letters lilt-
Lessening life's lament,
Lifting lackadaisical love,
Lending life levity.

Living letters,
Like leavening loaves-
Lure liminal larks
Like lighted lamps.

Lush letters
Lavish learning
Like Luna
Ladles light.

Lovely letters,
Littered like leaves,
Lend luminaries
Lives like layered lotus'.


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Now that is very hard to write and you did magnificent zona, simply a marvalous penning
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Ha! That's a lot of "L"
Wow - That was a fierce flexing of poetic dexterity, all in tribute to L
AND it has a decent subject matter that intrigues as well.. I'm afraid I wouldn't enjoy it spoken - because all that L would get on my last nerve. But it IS quite fascinating to SEE it on paper.

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Thank you both! It all started innocently enough...lol.
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I love this...love the aliteration.
It's so fun to write like this!
I have lots I did with alitreration like this too and I'll post some.
Love the subject you chose too. This was just plain fun
and I really enjoyed! Great write and you did it so well!



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Thank you, Moonchild! I like them too, I did one in M once that was yummy...I think I'd re-do it before posting here...lol, and that's if I could find it! Sometimes aliteration can get tricky if you're trying to keep it clean. Thank you for reading and taking time to comment!
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