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Old 09-02-2006, 04:48 AM
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what a poem? really this poem was great, it hada bit of sophistication, and it was very inviting and warm
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Hello Jeez

This seemed like a great haiku style poem. I enjoyed it. I thought about the sunshine, warm weather and summertime after reading this. Good reading about your Sun Rise.

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Hi Jeez,

Great poem, in it, alot of warmth and a feeling of nature's rays penetrating our souls with brightness and an inner voice to write this poem that you have. I appreciate simple poems like this. It says so much in few words.

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WHOA JEEZ - I was expecting something really spectacularly worded and long-read, but you've surprised with a bit of finesse... This short piece is the epitome of questioning the intent of the Maker - if you will.

I've heard questions: "If there is a God - why is there such turmoil amongst "His" People?"

I believe you've answered that question - And you've answered it with an astounding UMPH!

Enjoyed this one thoroughly - Seems you didn't waste a word!
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