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Old 12-20-2006, 01:40 AM
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You conflict seeker!


Hearts are breaking


And you sit there
stunned by the guilt
you don't feel...


YOU were my world

My...
Everything.

When the sun ceases to shine
I'll know your love has died.


And so have I.



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Old 12-20-2006, 11:43 PM
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- What a write BEAUTIFUL! This poem wastes no words at'all! The matter-of-fact way you've "SPOKEN" is just so very poignant.

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YOU were my world
A bit of anger without hostility. Honesty without bitterness.
Truth is imperative here and I think you've spoken your truth loud-n-clear.
Excellent write - Thanx for sharing it!

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Old 12-21-2006, 12:09 AM
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Thanks for your comments! Much appreciated. Yeah, the subject i wrote this about is just being annoying me now. There's no deep feeling to it anymore. Just surface pain.



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Thanks for your comments! Much appreciated. Yeah, the subject i wrote this about is just being annoying me now. There's no deep feeling to it anymore. Just surface pain.
mmmm - I know what you mean
Actually seems like I could've written that poem meself, as I sooooo hate annoying - It's well written too

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Old 02-27-2007, 02:45 AM
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Yeah annoying is bad.



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Old 02-27-2007, 03:14 AM
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wow...so simplistic yet ...it's like a picture speaks a thousand words...:]



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Old 02-28-2007, 12:28 AM
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I loved the strong emotion...since I've been there! Short and to the point!

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Old 03-02-2007, 01:55 AM
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