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Old 09-09-2007, 04:43 AM
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Watery Ways
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cumulating clouds-- sprinkles above
heaven endowed-- down pourings of love

her watery ways-- riding her rivers
mysterious waves-- geysers delivered

glaciers to savor-- flurries of splendors
ice-creams of flavors-- snowflakes so tender

freshly sown snows-- sailing her seas
fomenting flows-- spawned pearls to be

raining her dancing-- she filters man’s air
snowing her prancing-- dousing despair

spring drops of duty-- gracings of green
a bubbling brook beauty-- waterfalls serene

bathing anticipations-- tearings of joy
stormy precipitations-- floating boats of a boy

enticing her forms-- the lily of life
hot springs of warm-- sprinkler of spice

her watery ways-- swimming in swirls
mysterious waves-- surfing her curls

her misting eyes-- quenching of thirst
monsooning sighs-- the deluging burst

lightning and thunder--- twinklings and splashings
snowflakes of wonder-- drenching and flashings

tranquilling pools-- moist kisses sublime
steamy spent fuels-- perspirations in time

cumulating clouds-- sprinkles above
heaven endowed-- down pourings of love




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This is absolutely breathtaking George! I could read it forever! Intricate and delicate pairings...and never-ending dance of delight, this piece.

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I looooooooooooove this style it is so, so astonishing how well it flows and your choice of words were amazing. everything seemed to be put together very well. This is definitely something you'd have to read more than once to make sure you got everything and the best part is you would want to read it again after the first part. I want to quote a piece of your work that caught my eye...

glaciers to savor-- flurries of splendors
ice-creams of flavors-- snowflakes so tender

freshly sown snows-- sailing her seas
fomenting flows-- spawned pearls to be

raining her dancing-- she filters man’s air
snowing her prancing-- dousing despair

spring drops of duty-- gracings of green
a bubbling brook beauty-- waterfalls serene


This is awesome. It seems to be a fairy tale the way you put the woman in their and the enchanting beautiful weather that is surrounding her. Thanks for the read;



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Nomad and KingAce,

Hey, thanks for the responces. And King really thanks your response brightened my day.


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great imagery ... great words ... great piece of work ...

aren't we all made up of two thirds water? guess that's why your poem flowed so well ...

excellent stuff...



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