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Old 03-01-2008, 02:55 PM
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you get this point acrossed with superb language,
the last 4 lines were the best,



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Old 03-02-2008, 08:05 AM
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This was well said.
Good clear language and speaks volumes
of truth. Very nice! I like how you look at it.



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i like your stuff already. kind of a left handed gentle backslap to those who forget in the beginning and how it ends.

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you get this point acrossed with superb language,
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thanx for reading Erik...yip I liked the last 4 lines best meself



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i like your stuff already. kind of a left handed gentle backslap to those who forget in the beginning and how it ends.

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thank-you zaac!....it is one of my more dippy efforts
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This was well said.
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Dear solo,

Your writing is very very unique. A fresh outlook on topics not well written of. That intrigues me ans does your poetic stance. You give me things to ponder upon as I go and never lose the beauty. Bravo. Loved this!

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Your writing is very very unique. A fresh outlook on topics not well written of. That intrigues me ans does your poetic stance. You give me things to ponder upon as I go and never lose the beauty. Bravo. Loved this!

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Very kind words....Thank-you....I give myself freedom with my pen I do not find elsewhere...thank-you



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