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Wet Waves
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Both of us on a
warm beach laying
in the heat of the
days sun.
Waiting for the
feeling of the wet
cool waves.
As the nights
wildness, comes in
with a run.
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Dear Abae,
When you come, you come strong!!! hmmmmmmm I loved this, as we all know I am a lover of the short and poignant!! Thank you for this as you leave me pondering exactly what does one do with "nights wildness"? Part 2 perhaps? LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Looking forward to more. Love Ya' Abae!!!!!!
When you come, you come strong!!! hmmmmmmm I loved this, as we all know I am a lover of the short and poignant!! Thank you for this as you leave me pondering exactly what does one do with "nights wildness"? Part 2 perhaps? LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Looking forward to more. Love Ya' Abae!!!!!!
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Abae, this one is beautifully scribed! Laying on the beach on a warm day is officially the BEST way to spend your day, especially with someone in your arms! Double Dutch Fudge and warm Caramel yummy!!
The best part though, is watching the moon rise and create a silvery canvas on the previously fire-tipped waves...if I were you I'd watch that "wildness" tho....overheating here...LOL!
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Wet Waves
When you come, you come strong!!! hmmmmmmm I loved this, as we all know I am a lover of the short and poignant!! Thank you for this as you leave me pondering exactly what does one do with "nights wildness"? 
Part 2 perhaps? LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Looking forward to more. Love Ya' Abae!!!!!! 
