Abae

This write was done with the
full collaboration of Ms AlTrees'
knowledge of form and style
of the Pantoum.

Thanks very much Ms AlTree.

Cementcoveredcherries

Hi Jena,
I don't think that I have ever been exposed to this form, the meter makes it easy to transition this poem into a song. The message behind your words I found to be poignant and hopeful at the same time, the balance truly is spectacular. Thank you Jena & Tree for teaching me a new style of poetry "The Pantoum" I think I might give it a go as well.
Cheers,
Rania

Abae

Thanks very much
Rania for such a
nice review, on a
style of writing that
Y've just learned.

With lots of
guidence from Ms
Tree.

Glad you found
new ideas in
viewing this write.

Again Thanks

Jena.